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 Sharon Stone 2 (10x8)   Very slight lift on Signature.

Sharon Stone 2 (10x8) Very slight lift on Signature.

Date: 30/04/03 Views: 190091

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helyolight@hotmail.com

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First of all, you made a mistake.
the nation of Israel was only formed after the Great War, that is WWI.

Secondly, though the idea is quite creative, and is rich in irony, the story is quite bland. 'they use the total electric output of germany.'

I think you should try some more challenging writings in the future, and not just put on paper one idea.
Branch out.

Posted by Guest on Sat 31 Jan 2004 13:27:11 UTC

Yulanda

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i get the idea that last commenter was probably jewish and just looking for something to complain about. there is no mistake historically since by 1996 there was a nation called israel. its a good story michael please don't branch out i like the 55 word stories !

Posted by Guest on Sun 08 Feb 2004 06:15:22 UTC

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Branch out? It's not like all my 55's are single themed... This is one story, with a single plot.

It's also fiction - The Jews claim Israel as their destiny and they are a warmongering lot, so who knows what would have happened...

I agree about the "electricity" phrase though, it is messy.

Posted by Michael Lawrie on Thu 23 Dec 2004 09:55:40 UTC

GILES TODDS DAUGHTER!!!!

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i luv the LOTR 1!!!!

Posted by Guest on Thu 30 Dec 2004 22:37:52 UTC

Asdfjkl

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I'm Jewish and this is excellent...

Posted by Guest on Wed 15 Jun 2005 16:06:48 UTC

spacecowboy66

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Isn't this just a re-write of some script from Terminator 2?

Posted by Guest on Thu 01 Jun 2006 07:10:56 UTC

Tank

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Ah ha!
This is great!

Posted by Guest on Wed 01 Nov 2006 12:11:58 UTC

JML

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There are several things wrong with the logic of this story, but I'll just point out the most obvious. If the world had to pick one person to send back to save it, do you really think they would have picked Hitler?

Posted by Guest on Thu 22 Mar 2007 18:53:04 UTC

Peter

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Oh! Cmon smartaleks it's 1986. Its not Hitler they sent...Adolf is someone else who is sent to change the history of the world...and this nanofic suggests he succeeded.

Just not sure if it was that same old goat humper.

Posted by Guest on Tue 03 Apr 2007 09:39:33 UTC

Aurora

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hmm...you can't be wring in a fictional short story, you don't know what he's referencing, and you really can't say that he was faulted and here's the facts, it's just not right.

I like it, it's simple.

Posted by Guest on Tue 08 May 2007 18:41:00 UTC

Anonymous Frenchman

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hehe, nice one. I thought this was retarded until I read the last sentence, then I thought "awesome dude". lol :)

And chill people, who cares whether or not Israel would have existed without Nazi Germany, it's a clever take on things!

Posted by Guest on Fri 17 Oct 2008 18:54:31 UTC

blis

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If only the cafe owner marketed his business earlier... See Monogamy #1

Posted by Guest on Mon 25 Jan 2010 19:11:31 UTC

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your gay and retarted

Posted by chf (guest) on Thu 13 Oct 2011 22:01:39 UTC

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