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View CommentsYulandai get the idea that last commenter was probably jewish and just looking for something to complain about. there is no mistake historically since by 1996 there was a nation called israel. its a good story michael please don't branch out i like the 55 word stories ! Posted by Guest on Sun, 08 Feb 2004 06:15:22 +0000
Branch out? It's not like all my 55's are single themed... This is one story, with a single plot. Posted by Michael Lawrie on Thu, 23 Dec 2004 09:55:40 +0000 GILES TODDS DAUGHTER!!!!i luv the LOTR 1!!!! Posted by Guest on Thu, 30 Dec 2004 22:37:52 +0000 AsdfjklI'm Jewish and this is excellent... Posted by Guest on Wed, 15 Jun 2005 17:06:48 +0100 spacecowboy66Isn't this just a re-write of some script from Terminator 2? Posted by Guest on Thu, 01 Jun 2006 08:10:56 +0100 Tank
Ah ha! Posted by Guest on Wed, 01 Nov 2006 12:11:58 +0000 JMLThere are several things wrong with the logic of this story, but I'll just point out the most obvious. If the world had to pick one person to send back to save it, do you really think they would have picked Hitler? Posted by Guest on Thu, 22 Mar 2007 18:53:04 +0000 Peter
Oh! Cmon smartaleks it's 1986. Its not Hitler they sent...Adolf is someone else who is sent to change the history of the world...and this nanofic suggests he succeeded. Posted by Guest on Tue, 03 Apr 2007 10:39:33 +0100 Aurora
hmm...you can't be wring in a fictional short story, you don't know what he's referencing, and you really can't say that he was faulted and here's the facts, it's just not right. Posted by Guest on Tue, 08 May 2007 19:41:00 +0100 Anonymous Frenchman
hehe, nice one. I thought this was retarded until I read the last sentence, then I thought "awesome dude". lol :) Posted by Guest on Fri, 17 Oct 2008 19:54:31 +0100 blisIf only the cafe owner marketed his business earlier... See Monogamy #1 Posted by Guest on Mon, 25 Jan 2010 19:11:31 +0000 your gay and retarted Posted by chf (guest) on Thu, 13 Oct 2011 23:01:39 +0100 |
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First of all, you made a mistake.
the nation of Israel was only formed after the Great War, that is WWI.
Secondly, though the idea is quite creative, and is rich in irony, the story is quite bland. 'they use the total electric output of germany.'
I think you should try some more challenging writings in the future, and not just put on paper one idea.
Branch out.
Posted by Guest on Sat, 31 Jan 2004 13:27:11 +0000