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Well written and you do capture enough of the story, but the lack of a rhyme on the last word jarred me horribly.
Posted by Guest on Fri 23 Mar 2012 02:11:56 UTC
Rhyming
| show fullshow summaryWell written and you do capture enough of the story, but the lack of a rhyme on the last word jarred me horribly.
Posted by Guest on Fri 23 Mar 2012 02:11:56 UTC