First I want to cmnplimeot you on your work. Your underlying premise of the plot is sufficiently unique to be genuinely interesting. The story flows naturally and with good detail so that the mind’s eye can fill in the blanks and follow everything quite well. This is, IMHO, one of the hallmarks of a good author. Let me suggest you connect up with the people over at Baen books (www.baen.com). They have a free library of sci-fi books (most of which I’ve read) and frequently the first one or two books of a series are there and the rest of a series are available for purchase electronically for a very reasonable price (a nice strategy that let’s one sample an author’s work and then purchase those that are of interest; um, yes, that is experience talking; they do the paper publishing route also). I strongly suspect that given the quality of your first effort here, they would be very interested in signing you up for the present and future works, and would be able to advise you on...
First I want to cmnplimeot you on your work. Your underlying premise of the plot is sufficiently unique to be genuinely interesting. The story flows naturally and with good detail so that the mind’s eye can fill in the blanks and follow everything quite well. This is, IMHO, one of the hallmarks of a good author. Let me suggest you connect up with the people over at Baen books (www.baen.com). They have a free library of sci-fi books (most of which I’ve read) and frequently the first one or two books of a series are there and the rest of a series are available for purchase electronically for a very reasonable price (a nice strategy that let’s one sample an author’s work and then purchase those that are of interest; um, yes, that is experience talking; they do the paper publishing route also). I strongly suspect that given the quality of your first effort here, they would be very interested in signing you up for the present and future works, and would be able to advise you on things like cover art. The fact that your first work is essentially “public domain” (I’m not a lawyer, so that may be the wrong word) with your putting it out on this blog would not be a problem with them either. And talking about “social media,” the other nice thing about such an association is connecting immediately to a large audience interested in this sort of thing. They even have a Baen Community/Bar that facilitates such discussions (I do not participate in that for various reasons, time being one.) Many of Baen’s offerings would fall into the military sci-fi genre, as does your present work. I look forward to the continuing saga! (Oh, and thanks for the mention of my own humble blog, which serves as a hobby in an entirely different vein.)
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JE
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| show fullshow summaryFirst I want to cmnplimeot you on your work. Your underlying premise of the plot is sufficiently unique to be genuinely interesting. The story flows naturally and with good detail so that the mind’s eye can fill in the blanks and follow everything quite well. This is, IMHO, one of the hallmarks of a good author. Let me suggest you connect up with the people over at Baen books (www.baen.com). They have a free library of sci-fi books (most of which I’ve read) and frequently the first one or two books of a series are there and the rest of a series are available for purchase electronically for a very reasonable price (a nice strategy that let’s one sample an author’s work and then purchase those that are of interest; um, yes, that is experience talking; they do the paper publishing route also). I strongly suspect that given the quality of your first effort here, they would be very interested in signing you up for the present and future works, and would be able to advise you on...
First I want to cmnplimeot you on your work. Your underlying premise of the plot is sufficiently unique to be genuinely interesting. The story flows naturally and with good detail so that the mind’s eye can fill in the blanks and follow everything quite well. This is, IMHO, one of the hallmarks of a good author. Let me suggest you connect up with the people over at Baen books (www.baen.com). They have a free library of sci-fi books (most of which I’ve read) and frequently the first one or two books of a series are there and the rest of a series are available for purchase electronically for a very reasonable price (a nice strategy that let’s one sample an author’s work and then purchase those that are of interest; um, yes, that is experience talking; they do the paper publishing route also). I strongly suspect that given the quality of your first effort here, they would be very interested in signing you up for the present and future works, and would be able to advise you on things like cover art. The fact that your first work is essentially “public domain” (I’m not a lawyer, so that may be the wrong word) with your putting it out on this blog would not be a problem with them either. And talking about “social media,” the other nice thing about such an association is connecting immediately to a large audience interested in this sort of thing. They even have a Baen Community/Bar that facilitates such discussions (I do not participate in that for various reasons, time being one.) Many of Baen’s offerings would fall into the military sci-fi genre, as does your present work. I look forward to the continuing saga! (Oh, and thanks for the mention of my own humble blog, which serves as a hobby in an entirely different vein.)
Posted by Shaun (guest) on Wed, 01 Feb 2012 10:33:23 +0000