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55-Fiction1. About... ... 3. 75 Million ... 4. No Place... 5. An... 6. The Iliad 7. Lashings of... 8. First... 9. Sixty Eight... ... 59. Other 55'sRandom Image
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Rhyming
Well written and you do capture enough of the story, but the lack of a rhyme on the last word jarred me horribly.
Posted by Guest on Fri, 23 Mar 2012 02:11:56 +0000