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Posted by bob (guest) on Mon, 26 Mar 2012 17:55:07 +0000

Rhyming

Well written and you do capture enough of the story, but the lack of a rhyme on the last word jarred me horribly.

Posted by Guest on Fri, 23 Mar 2012 02:11:56 +0000

The realism of the above is exagerated

By the time that Bibo had the ring the nazgul were back. Besides,the books mention an endless storm (as in lightning) in the mountains surrounding mordor, and in "The Hobbit" the eagle's leader makes it clear that arrows can ill them with little trouble. Horde of orcs, anyone?

Posted by Matt (guest) on Wed, 04 Jan 2012 20:28:18 +0000

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A little strange, but interesting all the same.

Posted by Jennifer (guest) on Wed, 16 Nov 2011 19:53:32 +0000

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Posted by chf (guest) on Thu, 13 Oct 2011 22:01:39 +0000

Wierd comments :\

Posted by Olga (guest) on Thu, 29 Sep 2011 11:51:39 +0000

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Posted by Guest on Sun, 11 Sep 2011 18:57:55 +0000

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Love this

Posted by Jo John (guest) on Sat, 23 Apr 2011 04:55:57 +0000

AngeloY:
> You honestly don't think that the nazguls circling around Mt.Doom would strike down the eagles in seconds?

At the time Bilbo had the ring there wasn't much of that going on.

Posted by Michael (guest) on Thu, 14 Apr 2011 08:40:12 +0000

ummm

anne frank right?

Posted by -_-_-_-_- (guest) on Fri, 10 Dec 2010 00:53:53 +0000

You honestly don't think that the nazguls circling around Mt.Doom would strike down the eagles in seconds?

Posted by AngeloY (guest) on Mon, 06 Dec 2010 03:39:24 +0000

Jolly good!

(PS: I would indeed have been offended re George - not the demise, just the description!)

Posted by nomdeboardie (guest) on Fri, 17 Sep 2010 14:14:45 +0000

Comment on time travel

Loved it and will forward to my daughter, studying physics as a Freshman in college.

Posted by Loved it (guest) on Thu, 09 Sep 2010 17:19:05 +0000

You guys suck.
Beth is a lovely person, who cares what she wears?
She was probably just in a punk band hahaha

Posted by SebyS (guest) on Tue, 10 Aug 2010 14:28:00 +0000

GNO

Made me laugh. Great twist.

Posted by Guest on Thu, 11 Feb 2010 12:52:53 +0000

blis

indeed, the wood worms will ultimately spam the foundations of the net and carbon will no longer exist in the universe while we claim it to be evil and hydrogen our friend. The Universe is made of Hydrogen and ignorance : Dobson.

Posted by Guest on Mon, 25 Jan 2010 19:21:54 +0000

blis

But could it lift heavy objects and kill spiders?

Posted by Guest on Mon, 25 Jan 2010 19:13:23 +0000

blis

If only the cafe owner marketed his business earlier... See Monogamy #1

Posted by Guest on Mon, 25 Jan 2010 19:11:31 +0000

blis

This is by far the most powerful of the three. It's gonna take me a long time to resolve and conclude...

Posted by Guest on Mon, 25 Jan 2010 19:03:44 +0000

blis

Alas, boredom, one should find a good friend within them self, then one can enjoy the pleasure of sharing boredom with others.

Posted by Guest on Mon, 25 Jan 2010 18:50:21 +0000

Kiro

There has been no new / Fifty-five fic for two years / Please, where have you gone?

Posted by Guest on Sun, 15 Nov 2009 19:13:29 +0000

Dasha

haha :D i like this one

Posted by Guest on Tue, 06 Oct 2009 00:28:19 +0000

Michael

Ah does this work then?

Posted by Guest on Thu, 01 Oct 2009 16:31:18 +0000

Test test

Posted by Michael Lawrie on Thu, 01 Oct 2009 16:25:12 +0000

Gabriel

Are we supposed to have even more sympathy for Beth because she's "generally lovely?"

Posted by Guest on Thu, 03 Sep 2009 06:38:03 +0000

Andy

Yay for virii!

Posted by Guest on Tue, 05 May 2009 22:33:06 +0000

Anon

How are we supposed to have sympathy for Republicans? They claim to be human but we know they're really not! Sheesh.

Posted by Guest on Thu, 26 Feb 2009 00:22:41 +0000

natalie

I thought that it was pretty cool. I never knew that interviewing yourself could actually be kind of fun to try to do.

Posted by Guest on Tue, 10 Feb 2009 18:36:04 +0000

Emma

Creepy, dude. But I loved it.

Posted by Guest on Wed, 14 Jan 2009 13:15:23 +0000

Anonymous Frenchman

hehe I think I get it.

Posted by Guest on Fri, 17 Oct 2008 19:06:56 +0000

Anonymous Frenchman

hehe, nice one. I thought this was retarded until I read the last sentence, then I thought "awesome dude". lol :)

And chill people, who cares whether or not Israel would have existed without Nazi Germany, it's a clever take on things!

Posted by Guest on Fri, 17 Oct 2008 18:54:31 +0000

Jenna

This is so creepy! It's JUST like the book I finished reading an hour ago.

Posted by Guest on Thu, 18 Sep 2008 20:50:17 +0000

Cara

I like this, it feels uplifiting, challenging the preconceived idea we form for the ending. Thank you.

Posted by Guest on Wed, 17 Sep 2008 16:42:31 +0000

Phil Seaker

Very nice. Colour is very important. Especially the butterfly.

Posted by Guest on Thu, 20 Mar 2008 04:34:19 +0000

billy bob

this is about termites destroying one of the old wooden globes

Posted by Guest on Wed, 06 Feb 2008 20:42:49 +0000

MrHams

HA! Love it

Posted by Guest on Wed, 16 Jan 2008 03:28:24 +0000

Alex

Once he eats his cake, it's gone. His hands are empty. He no longer has it. So the expression means that he wants two contradictory things; you can't have it both ways.

Posted by Guest on Fri, 21 Sep 2007 23:07:15 +0000

Yay! The spam filter works. Thank you Magnus.

Posted by Michael Lawrie on Wed, 12 Sep 2007 23:25:57 +0000

jdavis

great story...I know time travel can be an easy cop out, but this was hilarious.

Posted by Guest on Mon, 27 Aug 2007 18:37:51 +0000

Ima Wurdibitsch

I use your site as a place to find good examples for anyone who wants to participate in 55 Fiction Friday with me. I think I'd die of embarrassment if I had to submit mine for formal critique even though I would really love to know if they are any good. I love your 55s.

Posted by Guest on Fri, 24 Aug 2007 21:25:49 +0000

Chan ([email protected])

(04:08, Apr 10, 2004) Morbid. Wonderful, but morbid.

Posted by Guest on Wed, 13 Jun 2007 20:29:20 +0000

I had to delete this one and pop it back because of too many comments advertising dodgy drugs companies. Just for my reference, there were 1804 views when I deleted it, and only one comment which I will add back.

Posted by Michael Lawrie on Wed, 13 Jun 2007 20:28:01 +0000

Ali

I first saw these 55-fictions on Cathy's site, and having attempted Haiku some months ago, thought I'd give this a go. Hope it's OK. Will link back to here. I can be found at aygosliblog.blogspot.com

Posted by Guest on Mon, 21 May 2007 23:08:37 +0000

Mirri

Awww. Poor ladies.

Posted by Guest on Mon, 14 May 2007 23:43:57 +0000

Aurora

hmm...you can't be wring in a fictional short story, you don't know what he's referencing, and you really can't say that he was faulted and here's the facts, it's just not right.

I like it, it's simple.

Posted by Guest on Tue, 08 May 2007 18:41:00 +0000

Cathy

Having heard about 55 through another blog I decided to try It and now do one every Friday as do some of my fellow bloggers.I intend to use your picture as alink to your site as I want to make a list of 55 links if you object you can find me here:-
litcor.blogspot.com

Posted by Guest on Sat, 28 Apr 2007 13:51:38 +0000

Peter

Oh! Cmon smartaleks it's 1986. Its not Hitler they sent...Adolf is someone else who is sent to change the history of the world...and this nanofic suggests he succeeded.

Just not sure if it was that same old goat humper.

Posted by Guest on Tue, 03 Apr 2007 09:39:33 +0000

Sorbus

She fades to nothing. Her past self decided to end the study, not realising that had she continued she would have succeeded. There's the paradox.

Posted by Guest on Wed, 28 Mar 2007 16:59:41 +0000

JML

There are several things wrong with the logic of this story, but I'll just point out the most obvious. If the world had to pick one person to send back to save it, do you really think they would have picked Hitler?

Posted by Guest on Thu, 22 Mar 2007 18:53:04 +0000

JML

Do you really have a problem with monogamy or people marrying the wrong people?

Posted by Guest on Thu, 22 Mar 2007 18:50:58 +0000

JML

I'm failing to see the paradox in the story. I see the irony, but not the paradox.

Posted by Guest on Thu, 22 Mar 2007 18:46:35 +0000

JML

How are we supposed to have sympathy for Beth, a character who believes in one thing and portrays herself as the complete opposite for the sake of her own pleasure?

Posted by Guest on Thu, 22 Mar 2007 18:43:29 +0000

jed

this ones awesome.

Posted by Guest on Thu, 01 Feb 2007 06:07:58 +0000

You will be expecting me to write slash fiction next, won't you. Shudder.

Posted by Michael Lawrie on Wed, 10 Jan 2007 05:57:23 +0000

Hailee

yuckk.

Posted by Guest on Mon, 08 Jan 2007 20:13:47 +0000

Tank

Ah ha!
This is great!

Posted by Guest on Wed, 01 Nov 2006 12:11:58 +0000

Tank

Wouldn't having a cake and eating it constitute eating the same cake twice at the same time?
Or consecutively?
Maybe you throw up, and eat the digested remains of said cake.

The mysteries this universe carries, oi vey.

Posted by Guest on Wed, 01 Nov 2006 12:09:20 +0000

spacecowboy66

Isn't this just a re-write of some script from Terminator 2?

Posted by Guest on Thu, 01 Jun 2006 07:10:56 +0000

Jess

I'm glad I'm not the only one to have noticed that particular gaping plot-hole. Quite inexcusable, as much as I do love the books. =)

Posted by Guest on Thu, 30 Mar 2006 11:28:15 +0000

cal

good but could have done better

Posted by Guest on Thu, 26 Jan 2006 14:25:11 +0000

cal

this is good, but add more mystery

Posted by Guest on Thu, 26 Jan 2006 14:22:46 +0000

Hannah

Haha. Funny. I liked it.

Posted by Guest on Thu, 08 Dec 2005 05:25:53 +0000

Bianca

OMG! That was so hilarious!!!! LOL

Posted by Guest on Thu, 08 Dec 2005 03:05:08 +0000

vickijoan

I love this one! I am a storyteller and do presentations about the 55 word format - this is one of my favorite examples!

Posted by Guest on Wed, 09 Nov 2005 14:41:52 +0000

Clo.

I'm crap at commenting but this version is ace. Much better than that other guy's.

Posted by Guest on Sat, 25 Jun 2005 23:02:42 +0000

Asdfjkl

I'm Jewish and this is excellent...

Posted by Guest on Wed, 15 Jun 2005 16:06:48 +0000

Adam

...but where was Timmy?

Posted by Guest on Sat, 11 Jun 2005 00:57:57 +0000

Adam

Setting George and Anne up was a masterstroke!

Posted by Guest on Sat, 11 Jun 2005 00:56:49 +0000

A. Kidd

I'm a complete Tolkien fan and when I read this story It made me feel better to know that some people are as passionate as me.

Posted by Guest on Wed, 23 Feb 2005 12:26:23 +0000

GILES TODDS DAUGHTER!!!!

i like this 1, but it frightens me.

Posted by Guest on Thu, 30 Dec 2004 22:44:40 +0000

GILES TODDS DAUGHTER!!!!

ok, lorry, that woz just not funny.

Posted by Guest on Thu, 30 Dec 2004 22:41:41 +0000

GILES TODDS DAUGHTER!!!!

i luv the LOTR 1!!!!

Posted by Guest on Thu, 30 Dec 2004 22:37:52 +0000

Branch out? It's not like all my 55's are single themed... This is one story, with a single plot.

It's also fiction - The Jews claim Israel as their destiny and they are a warmongering lot, so who knows what would have happened...

I agree about the "electricity" phrase though, it is messy.

Posted by Michael Lawrie on Thu, 23 Dec 2004 09:55:40 +0000

christina

love this one. that's why i won't write any 55-fiction. and if i did, i wouldn't show it to you. :p

Posted by Guest on Fri, 09 Jul 2004 14:53:24 +0000

christina. yeah, that's me.

my dear michael, you know i lurve you dearly. i had to post the very first comment on this one. thanks for my very own 55-fiction story. *kisses*

Posted by Guest on Fri, 09 Jul 2004 14:48:24 +0000

Michael

If it had been 58 word stories, they would have been able to have tea and cream-cakes... In fact, in the original they had crumpets but I had to sacrifice that whole plot addition to save 2 words I am afraid.

Posted by Guest on Thu, 08 Jul 2004 00:19:02 +0000

...

I'm not sure I can picture Sauron saying "bugger me."

Glad everyone got the chance to have tea, though. Well, everyone except Sauron.

Posted by Guest on Thu, 17 Jun 2004 14:13:40 +0000

fer

Actually this reminds me of the Maupassant short stories I studied for French A-Level, especially "Deux Amis", which was heartbreaking and beautiful and simple.

Posted by Guest on Wed, 07 Apr 2004 08:54:06 +0000

fer

I love stories where you can make up the situation that fits the bare clean bones that have already been written.

Posted by Guest on Wed, 07 Apr 2004 08:39:28 +0000

Sara

*hops about in circles* I am the person who you updated the date on the bottom of the site for, and stopped emailing! *glares darkly* But I am showing people at school, this one, because it is nifty and morbid! *sits down* I should be TAing, like a good TA, but I'm not. Oh well. Math test to go to, give me a noose. *jumps off a bridge*

Posted by Guest on Mon, 15 Mar 2004 20:04:07 +0000

Yulanda

i get the idea that last commenter was probably jewish and just looking for something to complain about. there is no mistake historically since by 1996 there was a nation called israel. its a good story michael please don't branch out i like the 55 word stories !

Posted by Guest on Sun, 08 Feb 2004 06:15:22 +0000

[email protected]

First of all, you made a mistake.
the nation of Israel was only formed after the Great War, that is WWI.

Secondly, though the idea is quite creative, and is rich in irony, the story is quite bland. 'they use the total electric output of germany.'

I think you should try some more challenging writings in the future, and not just put on paper one idea.
Branch out.

Posted by Guest on Sat, 31 Jan 2004 13:27:11 +0000

Vicky

-smirks- this is one of my favourites.

Posted by Guest on Fri, 03 Oct 2003 14:59:11 +0000