Date: 2004-03-20 Views: 57695
Well written and you do capture enough of the story, but the lack of a rhyme on the last word jarred me horribly.
Posted by Guest on Fri, 23 Mar 2012 02:11:56 +0000
Rhyming
Well written and you do capture enough of the story, but the lack of a rhyme on the last word jarred me horribly.
Posted by Guest on Fri, 23 Mar 2012 02:11:56 +0000