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First of all, you made a mistake.
the nation of Israel was only formed after the Great War, that is WWI.

Secondly, though the idea is quite creative, and is rich in irony, the story is quite bland. 'they use the total electric output of germany.'

I think you should try some more challenging writings in the future, and not just put on paper one idea.
Branch out.

Posted by Guest on Sat, 31 Jan 2004 13:27:11 +0000

Yulanda

i get the idea that last commenter was probably jewish and just looking for something to complain about. there is no mistake historically since by 1996 there was a nation called israel. its a good story michael please don't branch out i like the 55 word stories !

Posted by Guest on Sun, 08 Feb 2004 06:15:22 +0000

Branch out? It's not like all my 55's are single themed... This is one story, with a single plot.

It's also fiction - The Jews claim Israel as their destiny and they are a warmongering lot, so who knows what would have happened...

I agree about the "electricity" phrase though, it is messy.

Posted by Michael Lawrie on Thu, 23 Dec 2004 09:55:40 +0000

GILES TODDS DAUGHTER!!!!

i luv the LOTR 1!!!!

Posted by Guest on Thu, 30 Dec 2004 22:37:52 +0000

Asdfjkl

I'm Jewish and this is excellent...

Posted by Guest on Wed, 15 Jun 2005 16:06:48 +0000

spacecowboy66

Isn't this just a re-write of some script from Terminator 2?

Posted by Guest on Thu, 01 Jun 2006 07:10:56 +0000

Tank

Ah ha!
This is great!

Posted by Guest on Wed, 01 Nov 2006 12:11:58 +0000

JML

There are several things wrong with the logic of this story, but I'll just point out the most obvious. If the world had to pick one person to send back to save it, do you really think they would have picked Hitler?

Posted by Guest on Thu, 22 Mar 2007 18:53:04 +0000

Peter

Oh! Cmon smartaleks it's 1986. Its not Hitler they sent...Adolf is someone else who is sent to change the history of the world...and this nanofic suggests he succeeded.

Just not sure if it was that same old goat humper.

Posted by Guest on Tue, 03 Apr 2007 09:39:33 +0000

Aurora

hmm...you can't be wring in a fictional short story, you don't know what he's referencing, and you really can't say that he was faulted and here's the facts, it's just not right.

I like it, it's simple.

Posted by Guest on Tue, 08 May 2007 18:41:00 +0000

Anonymous Frenchman

hehe, nice one. I thought this was retarded until I read the last sentence, then I thought "awesome dude". lol :)

And chill people, who cares whether or not Israel would have existed without Nazi Germany, it's a clever take on things!

Posted by Guest on Fri, 17 Oct 2008 18:54:31 +0000

blis

If only the cafe owner marketed his business earlier... See Monogamy #1

Posted by Guest on Mon, 25 Jan 2010 19:11:31 +0000

your gay and retarted

Posted by chf (guest) on Thu, 13 Oct 2011 22:01:39 +0000