Notes: I had been wondering for a while if I could rework Homer's Iliad in 55 words and still keep true to the original. I shall leave it to the reader to decide whether I managed it or not.
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Well written and you do capture enough of the story, but the lack of a rhyme on the last word jarred me horribly.
Posted by Guest on Fri 23 Mar 2012 02:11:56 GMT